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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Mark Nguyen: [QB] But... It's so close to perfection already! The only thing I'd noticed is the copious use of your pluralizations for the ships: "The Dominion war saw the Renaissances mainly taking part in counter-raiding operations. " "It would not be until the Dominion invasion that the Mediterraneans and the Caspians would be pressed to an active combat role." "Retirement of the Cheyennes was out of the question, however." While grammatically acceptable, to me it can sound rather awkward - especially when repeated so frequently. Was it a deliberate choice to avoid adding "-class" at the end of a name? For example: "Retirement of the Cheyenne class was out of the question, however." More a question of grammatical curiosity more than anything else... The content, of course, is fantastic. :) Mark [/QB][/QUOTE]
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