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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Shik: [QB] Woo doggies, it's been some time. But hey, we're up & ready to go again. That being said, I've done some edits & even have some new product. So, I present the first 4 articles for your perusal: [list] [*][b]Foundation[/b] covers the founding of the Federation and Starfleet in 2161, with a minor recapping of the Romulan War. (9 pgs.) [*][b]Unity[/b] covers 2162 through 2175. (10 pgs) [*][b]Trailblazer[/b] details ships from 2186 to 2202, interim history from 2175. (12 pgs.) [*][b]Deeprange[/b] runs from 2221 to 2242, with interim history from 2200. (17 pgs.) [/list] I've also included the initial draft for [b]Sentinel[/b] (20 pgs.), which covers 2254 to 2269...sort of. The interim history runs from about 2240 & the article in truth ends at 2265, but the last class enters service in 2269, so it's somewhat pseudopodic. As usual, looking for general critique & comment, & even possible enjoyment. Questions, comments, complaints, & racial epithets can be sent my way as needed. I would ask that they be of a constructive nature, though; don't just say me you don't like something, tell me why. Be specific. I'd also appreciate being told of any grammatical & spelling errors; sometimes the eyes slide over things after so many readings. In the case of Sentinel, I know there's overuse of some words. Normally I make great use of Word's thesaurus but that article was about 85% written on a crappy mobile phone-sized Android tablet & I couldn't find a free thesaurus app with a sufficiently diverse offline dictionary. Keep that in mind: I'm effectively writing a book on a cellphone. All files are in PDF format for easier viewing on tablets, & can be found here: https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B5HtjQmKMnxcamJxaXVpYUpvaGc&usp=sharing [/QB][/QUOTE]
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