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That's more like it, but since you shortened the bridge's rear extension quite a bit it's less noticeable. (I kind of liked the longer bridge.) You'll now need to make the correction on the refit.
Something else I noticed: On the side view, the block above the rear primary hull extension is missing the lines separting the beveled top and bottom parts from the middle part with straight sides. The lines are present on the other views. I also suggest you darken the top part of the central nacelle pylon. It looks too light to be under the rear engine deck. If I had onlly the side view, I'd assume that the nacelle pylons were actually attacked to the sides of the rear primary hull extension.
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