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Ed BWC
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posted

Just something I drew up tonight. The LN-67 nacelles turned out better than I thought they would. [Smile]

[ July 14, 2002, 19:29: Message edited by: Ed BWC ]

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Wraith
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Member # 779

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Not too bad; I think it'd be better if the 'neck' were a bit shorter though. [Smile]

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Ed BWC
Ex-Member

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Think of it as a step between Enterprise Class and the Excelsior Class, a miniature Excelsior if you will.

[ July 14, 2002, 19:10: Message edited by: Ed BWC ]

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Fabrux
Epic Member
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That neck doesn't look right. Maybe move the saucer and stardrive closer together.

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Ed BWC
Ex-Member

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Well,here is the front.

(Dang, saw a major mistake...)

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Aban Rune
Former ascended being
Member # 226

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You know... when people give suggestions... it's customary to at least acknowledge them. I'll repeat the thougts already given, the neck is too long. You might want to try shortening it up a bit.

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Ed BWC
Ex-Member

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I already have that kind done, side and front, and just was waiting to put them up, because it just happended to be 1 in the morning and I was tired...

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Ed BWC
Ex-Member

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Well, I'm sorry, but the shorter neck dont work right. For any noticable difference, it woldnt give enough room for the photon torpedo launcer to work. Sorry.

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Shik
Starship database: completed; History of Starfleet: done; website: probably never
Member # 343

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Your nacelles are way too thin.

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Ed BWC
Ex-Member

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Will do, Shik, I need to redo those anyway.

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Fabrux
Epic Member
Member # 71

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Shorter lengthwise, not heightwise.

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