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AndrewR
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NICE!

Just a few extra little things...

I think the main impulse engine is too far down? Is it big enough?

The second and third shuttle bays should be more easily seen... I think they are inset.

The 'back-bone' of the secondary hull doesn't curve DOWN like that I think it tapers with out an arc...

And I guess you haven't finished but there are no windows or vents etc on decks 2? and 3?

Oh, and where are the transporter emitters?

Yes, can we see a front on view.

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I think possibly that the saucer impulse engines are too "inset", or whatever. It makes the part where the neck meets the saucer look a bit structuraly unsound. I'd make the "chunk" taken out of the saucer for them a bit smaller.

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A full set of detailed views from all angles won't be available until it's finished. So this is just a quickie - didn't have time to do anything more detailed.

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If you need to have detailed infomation to correct and add in more detail on your Galaxy class ship. I do not want to nitpick your work but help you out with some reference material which I hope this helps in your venture. Galaxy Class blueprints and schematic info [Smile]

I hope this help's you Red Admiral

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Hey it's Gilso! Love your site.

On the front view, to me the upper half of the engineering hull seems to be a little too curved.

The main shuttlebay seems to stand out more because it has different detail from the rest of the ship, and it's also a tad too long.

Other than that, better than most I have seen.

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The Red Admiral
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Thank you for the comments and the useful nitpicks, I don't take them as criticisms, because as alluded to before this is a WIP. It is far from finished.

I don't know if, or how, the secondary hull has become too curved. I've used plenty of schematics and reference material to make this model, doing it freehand and on the fly would be utterly impossible. So in my opinion it is correct as far as the dimensions of the hull are concerned.
(with a few mesh edges and other details yet to iron out and tidy up)

Gilso, thanks ever so much for the link. These detailed and hi res schematics will be very useful for this and other projects.. Excellent.

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What I mean is the deflector dish, the top part is too curved. Take a look at Gilso's and you will know what I mean.

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Of course, the two TNG Enterprise-D models do have differently shaped engineering hulls anyway, so there is room for interpretation.

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Seriously? Do you have pictures to show me? I never could tell the difference beyond the surface detail.

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PsyLiam
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Er, there was a thread about it a few months back. Someone said that they thought the 4 foot model looked "pregnent", and thus hated it. There was probably an anti-Berman & Braga comment in there too.

Someone with better memory who is less lazy than me want to look it up?

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Great work as usual, RA.

I believe the 'pregnant' discussion was was in reference to the STIII Excelsior looking like a 'pregnant guppy.' Not entirely groundless

There is some discussion of the differences between the 4 and 6ft Galaxy models starting around here .

If someone pokes me with a stick I'll upload a comparison front view of the two models, but then I'm sure the resourceful among you must certainly have this image.

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*pokes Balaam Xumucane with a stick*

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The Red Admiral
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'poke times two'.

It would be a interesting and useful comparison.

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bX
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[IMAGE REMOVED]

EDIT: Sorry, Kids. Content VERBOTTEN

[ August 13, 2002, 22:35: Message edited by: Balaam Xumucane ]

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the 4 foot model is way better.
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