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Posted by Baloo (Member # 5) on :
You definitely have her "pissed off" look down pat !
Criticisms: Few.
Her neck and face look much more natural than the Kira pic.
Nice highlights.
Where her waist meets her hips looks slightly odd, but it's difficult to tell what's creating that effect. It appears as though her left back muscles attach further outboard of her spine than the counterpart muscle group on the right.
The fingers on her right hand are almost the same length, and might be too small compared to the rest of her.
Her left buttock, although closer to the "camera" than the right one, appears to be slightly smaller, and flatter (not as good of highlighting on that one as the other -- I guess that this means 50% of her butt is fabulous ).
--Baloo
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[This message has been edited by Baloo (edited February 12, 2000).]
Posted by Mythril (Member # 286) on :
I think it is the way i placed her arm it blocks the full plumb firmness of seven's butt.
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