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Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
Almost but not quite there...going through the DS9 Companion I found reference to these three ships that seemed to have been cut in either the final draft or tv edit (the Hawk reference, by far, is the most interesting).

From "Business as Usual":
quote:

DAX
The Vulcan science vessel T'Pan is requesting permission to dock.

KIRA
Put her at Docking Bay Three.

DAX
The Wellington has finished refueling. It should decouple within the hour.

KIRA
Got it.

From "Resurrection":
quote:

WORF (telling story)
I was seventeen and serving as an ensign on the U.S.S. Hawk. We were two days out of port when this anomaly hit us --

Found these nuggets interesting, thought I'd share. [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Captain Boh (Member # 1282) on :
 
So Worf started in Starfleet at 13? [Big Grin]
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
Wow, that's awesome! [Eek!]

I should have checked through more scripts after you turned up that Garuda reference in "Shakaar" last year.

Good work, once again! My hero!

-MMoM [Big Grin]
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Captain Boh:
So Worf started in Starfleet at 13? [Big Grin]

According to his computer bio from "Conundrum" (TNG) he entered the Academy in 2357, at the age of 17. So it would appear that the Hawk was a training vessel.
 
Posted by Identity Crisis (Member # 67) on :
 
John M Ford's The Final Reflection (for a long time the definitive Klingon novel) has Klingons maturing faster than humans, so 17 would be early 20s in human terms. This is somewhat supported by Alexander's bizarre aging.

OTOH this early maturity was part of an overall shorter lifespan which is contrary to Koloth, et all still being around in the 2270s.
 
Posted by Timo (Member # 245) on :
 
Then again, perhaps no Klingon ever really got to test their "natural" lifespan before? [Smile]

Having Worf be an ensign at seventeen, at an age when Picard wasn't even a cadet yet, is not objectionable per se. We don't know if there are entry age limitations in existence - we know Picard tried officer training at seventeen while others seem to have entered at eighteen, but that could be a mere coincidence, or something specific to human candidates.

The objectionable part would be having Worf spend so much time at these low ranks, if the references to his age during the shows hold true (he must have been at least six during the Khitomer massacre, etc). Then again, moving up from Ensign doesn't seem to be a major prestige issue in Starfleet, and might not have been one for Worf, either. Despite his obsession with the Klingon honor propaganda, he never appeared to be hungry for promotions. It could be that hunger for promotions ISN'T part of the propaganda version of honorable Klingon conduct, of course.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
I think the basis for Captain Boh's remark is that, so far as us civilians know, one gets to be an ensign after spending four years at the Academy. In other words, if Worf entered Starfleet at 17, he still wouldn't be an ensign until 21. And Star Trek has consistantly referred to Academy attendees as cadets, not ensigns.


Marian
 
Posted by Mark Nguyen (Member # 469) on :
 
*cough*Kirk on the Republic*cough*

Mark
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
...or Nog.

I'm rather liking the idea that perhaps Worf was able to enter the Academy at a younger age because...again, of the Klingons faster rate of maturity.

Of course, it does contradict the "Conundrum" display...

However, consider his three-quarter Klingon son who could walk and talk rather coherently at age 1 ("Reunion" - 2367) and serving as a crewman aboard the Rotarran by age 8 ("Sons and Daughters" - 2374)!! Granted its a stretch but unfortunately that's the way it happened... [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
it does contradict the "Conundrum" display
Which display? Worf's bio wasn't shown.
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Spike:
quote:
it does contradict the "Conundrum" display
Which display? Worf's bio wasn't shown.
The Chronology seems to indicate that was one...
 
Posted by Veers (Member # 661) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim:
I should have checked through more scripts after you turned up that Garuda reference in "Shakaar" last year.

Speaking of the Garuda, I've seen something that says there was a Nebula-class ship in that episode, and that was supposed to be the Garuda. So, to anyone who has the episode--was there a Nebula in "Shakaar?" Is this one of those ships no one mentions because it was not listed on Joe Creighton's site, like the Nebula from "Doctor Bashir, I Presume?"

Sorry to get sidetracked...
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
There was no Nebula seen, although the script describes the Garuda as being "the same type of ship as the Prometheus", which was at that time a Nebula class ship.
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
The Chronology seems to indicate that was one...
Nope, only Crusher, Data, MacDuff, Picard, Ro Laren and Troi were shown.
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
And, considering that MacDuff wasn't even real, anything seen in those records has to be considered suspect.
 
Posted by Jason Abbadon (Member # 882) on :
 
Mac duff was'nt real, but man, he sure could take a phaser blast.
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by TSN:
And, considering that MacDuff wasn't even real, anything seen in those records has to be considered suspect.

Well, there are indeed some errors in those records. Crusher is just a Lt. Cmdr., the first name of Troi's Father is Alex, and Ro Laren entered the Academy in 2358 and graduated in 2364 while her bio in "The Next Phase" shows 2358 and 2362.
 
Posted by AndrewR (Member # 44) on :
 
"Conundrum" was one of the first eps of TNG I saw... like in the first handful... so you can guess having McDuff turn up sort of threw me for a while! [Smile]
 
Posted by Woodside Kid (Member # 699) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by MarianLH:
And Star Trek has consistantly referred to Academy attendees as cadets, not ensigns.

Originally posted by Mark Nguyen:
*cough*Kirk on the Republic*cough*

Maybe, maybe not. The dialogue from "Court-Martial" states that Kirk and Finney became friends while Kirk was a midshipman. Kirk then says that some years later they were assigned to the same ship. The dialogue never mentions that Republic was a training ship, so it's just as likely (if not more probable) that this event occurred after Kirk graduated.
 
Posted by Cpt. Kyle Amasov (Member # 742) on :
 
I've seen Resurrection just once or twice a long time ago (though I really like Bareil the episode was a real stinker). In what context did Worf tell that story and what was it all about? I mean, was the whole dialogue cut or just that part?

The Wellington-bit on the other hand sounds familiar. I know they did that OPS-smalltalk often where they dropped some ship names, but I seem to remember that Kira mentioned the Wellington once.
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
RE: Resurrection...

Anyway, essentially it went as follows:

Dax and Worf had dinner with Kira and MirrorBariel.

So at dinner, Bariel is telling a story about how he stole a mekleth from the klingon guard and escaped from the prison cell he was in the day he was supposed to be executed. Worf thinks the story is a crock of shit, no warrior would ever get his mekleth theived while its on his body. Then dessert comes out, Bariel offers to cut the cake...with what-do-ya-know?! Worfs mekleth! (Bold=Cut from what was aired)

quote:

WORF (magnanimous)
Obviously, Bareil is a better thief than I gave him credit for. (grabbing a flask) More bloodwine?

BAREIL
Why not.

WORF
Now I will tell you one of my stories.

BAREIL
And I suppose every word of it will be true.

WORF
Mostly.

Worf finishes pouring the bloodwine, and begins telling his story to Bareil.

WORF
I was seventeen and serving as an ensign on the U.S.S. Hawk. We were two days out of port when this anomaly hit us --

As Worf goes on with his tale, Dax leans over to Kira.

DAX (sotto voce; re: Bareil)
I'll say this for him, he might not be as spiritual as Vedek Bareil -- but he's a lot more fun.

Kira smiles... she might not agree fully with Dax's statement, but she's happy to know her friends like her "date."

So that is that.


Additionally, just because Worfs bio wasn't seen on screen...and I'll admit I haven't seen the episode in ages, it doesnt mean one was seen offscreen. If Okuda wrote the Chronology (v1.0) and made the display, he of all people would know what Worfs bio said...but again, I haven't seeen the episode in ages.
 
Posted by Timo (Member # 245) on :
 
It seems the context of Worf's story casts a shadow of doubt on the veracity of its contents... [Smile]

But really, I wouldn't mind Worf entering the Academy at 13.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Woodside Kid:
Maybe, maybe not. The dialogue from "Court-Martial" states that Kirk and Finney became friends while Kirk was a midshipman. Kirk then says that some years later they were assigned to the same ship. The dialogue never mentions that Republic was a training ship, so it's just as likely (if not more probable) that this event occurred after Kirk graduated.

But Kirk referred to being a Lieutenant aboard the the Farragut as his "first assignment" out of the Academy in "Obsession." Thus, his previous Ensign-Republic assignment took place while he was still there.

The Chronology contains a note about this apparent confusion, citing that it is not impossible (though uncommon) for cadets to receive commissions to such low ranks as Ensign while still attending contemporary naval academies. For what that's worth.

As long as Worf said "ensign" and not some higher rank like lieutenant, he would only be covering the same ground Kirk had.

-MMoM [Big Grin]
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
Originally posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim:
quote:
As long as Worf said "ensign" and not some higher rank like lieutenant, he would only be covering the same ground Kirk had.
In his freshman year???


Marian
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
But Kirk referred to being a Lieutenant aboard the the Farragut as his "first assignment" out of the Academy in "Obsession."
IIRC he said that the Farragut was his first deep-space assignment and that Garrovick was his commanding officer from the day he left the academy. So maybe Garrovick first commanded USS Republic and Kirk served as an ensign aboard that ship and later Garrovick was given command of USS Farragut and Kirk also transfered to that vessel.
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
Unfortunately TOS didn't have or consider that kind of continuity in its writing.

Anyway, Worf could have easily been given some sort of field commission like Weasley..or Nog. Assuming he didn't start the Academy at a younger age...which in itself is an assumption.

Weasley was 15 when he first took the Entrance Exams and was at the same time an "acting Ensign". He was later field promoted to Ensign by the time he was 17.

Referring to the latter, Nog was a Cadet-3rd Class and promoted to an Ensign aboard the Defiant. He was likely much older than 18, but that is beside the point.
 
Posted by Timo (Member # 245) on :
 
Whether the Republic was a training ship and "part of the Academy", or an unrelated ship that happened to be captained by Garrovick, I think we have no pressing reason to assume Kirk got his commission before he graduated. We already know for sure that he served in the Academy while a lieutenant, as an instructor for Gary Mitchell's class - and since his postgrad Academy presence is thus established, the problem of Kirk being an Ensign while "at the Academy" becomes, well, academic.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Posted by B.J. (Member # 858) on :
 
A cadet being an ensign I can understand, but wasn't Savvik a Lieutenant while she was a cadet for the training cruise on the Enterprise in ST2?

B.J.
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
Okay, let me see if I understand this... This argument is over which of two pieces of information that were cut out of their respective episodes has more veracity?
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by B.J.:
A cadet being an ensign I can understand, but wasn't Savvik a Lieutenant while she was a cadet for the training cruise on the Enterprise in ST2?

B.J.

Maybe she graduated from Starfleet Academy as a science officer, served aboard a starship and then went back to Academy for command training.
 
Posted by Captain Boh (Member # 1282) on :
 
yes, I don't think it likely that someone would get that kind of command training in the standard academy course. If the Enterprise bridge crew had to be around for everyone's command tests... [Wink]
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
Ok, I'm trying to get this mess sorted out, and "show my work" a bit more than the Okudas did. It seems that they drew some major faulty conclusions based on incomplete examination of the evidence. Be prepared for some re-hash.

Basic assumptions, with which some might argue:

2233
2242
2250
Beyond this, things get vague and a bit tricky due to lack of specific dates, but by no means are they impossibly convoluted. Bear with me:

2250-2254
2254
2257
At some point after this, Lt. Kirk left shipboard assignments and became an instructor at Starfleet Academy. I would suggest that it was soon after, and that it was direct result of his guilt over the incident.

2259
At some point between this and 2264-65 (depending on when Kirk took command of the Enterprise in relation to when the 5-year mission started) Kirk gets back on the command track and is promoted to Captain. According to the TOS writer's guide, he was the youngest Captain in Starfleet at the time, and his first command (during which he asks for Mitchell to serve under him, and we may presume the incident on Dimorus described in WNMHGB occurred) was a destroyer-type vessel.

Ahh, there we go. Playing historian is aggravating but fun at the same time. [Wink]

As to Worf and the Hawk, there are basically four scenarios I can think of:

-MMoM [Big Grin]
 
Posted by MirrorCaptainMike (Member # 709) on :
 
couple of points, here:

-> Starfleet would of course have to edit its minimum age requirement for other species growth requirements. (Imagine why there would be no Ocampa in SF...) If the standard collegiate learning age for Klingons is in their early teens, that's when they'd have to admit him.

-> a rarely mentioned tidbit is that Peter Preston was supposed to be a 15 or 16 year old cadet in original drafts of TWOK, reinforcing the horatio hornblower influences on that flm...
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
IIRC, though they did refer to him as a midshipman, Preston's uniform indicated he was an NCO.
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
Originally posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim:
quote:
IIRC, though they did refer to him as a midshipman, Preston's uniform indicated he was an NCO.
Actually he wasn't even that. His rank pin was that of an Able Seaman, the naval equivalent of Private*. An NCO is a non-commissioned officer--a petty officer or up (or a corporal on up, in army parlance).


Marian

*or possibly PFC, depending on which navy we're talking about.
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
Originally posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim:
quote:
It seems that they drew some major faulty conclusions based on incomplete examination of the evidence.
This, IMHO, aptly describes a great deal of their work. Although my personal pet peeve is all the unnecessary pre-1700 Constitution registries. I'm sticking with my slighty-tweaked FJ-based list, thank you.

Ahem, [/soapbox]. Sorry.


quote:
Basic assumptions, with which some might argue:(*rest snipped for brevity*)
Good, solid speculation, which I will swipe for my one chronological purposes. I especially like the idea that Kirk did something spectacular related to Axenar while still a cadet. It unravels more than one tangle.

There are two issues I would take with it, one minor and one major.

The minor one is that I prefer a 2264-69 dating for the five-year mission. ("Voyager" is guilty of so many consistancy errors that I have no problem ignoring "evidence" from it.) This is, however, my own interpretation; use or ignore as you like.

The major one is that, whatever a prop might have said, the actual protrayal of Gary Mitchell is not of someone just a couple years out of the academy, or someone who had a subordinate, mentor/student relationship with Kirk. Rather, they were of an age, and close friends.

In the novel Strangers From The Sky (IMHO, the best Star Trek novel ever written), Mitchel is a year or two older than Kirk, who had only recently surpassed him in rank in his meteoric rise to captain. I love this book, precisely because Bonnano's characters and their relationships ring so true, and could never accept something so incompatible with her portrayal.

In short, while I think you have an excellent speculation about Kirk's career, I must respectfully disagree with respect to Gary Mitchell.


Oh, and:
quote:
According to the TOS writer's guide, he was the youngest Captain in Starfleet at the time, and his first command (during which he asks for Mitchell to serve under him, and we may presume the incident on Dimorus described in WNMHGB occurred) was a destroyer-type vessel.
Vonda McIntyre's novel Enterprise gives this ship a name, the USS Lydia Sutherland. Mitchel was Commander Kirk's XO. The ship is also mentioned briefly in McIntyre's novelization of Star Trek IV. I had no idea, before reading your post, that McIntyre's speculation had any basis in fact.


Marian
 
Posted by SoundEffect (Member # 926) on :
 
I thought most peoples bios that we know of have their academy years between the ages of 18-22 for the four year program?
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
Monkey: Your fourth scenario isn't really a cop-out. How can you cop out of an explanation when one isn't required in the first place? The lines were cut. The "explanation" is: Worf never made any claims to being an ensign at age 17 in the first place.
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by MarianLH:
Actually he wasn't even that. His rank pin was that of an Able Seaman, the naval equivalent of Private*. An NCO is a non-commissioned officer--a petty officer or up (or a corporal on up, in army parlance).

Yes, thanks for clarifying.

quote:
Although my personal pet peeve is all the unnecessary pre-1700 Constitution registries.
I'd be inclined to agree, but the credit for that goes to Greg Jein for devising the scheme and Bjo Trimble for officializing it it in her Concordance. Though the Okudas are guilty of perpetuating it.

quote:
Good, solid speculation...There are two issues I would take with it, one minor and one major.
Thanks. There's no pleasing everyone...

quote:
The minor one is that I prefer a 2264-69 dating for the five-year mission. ("Voyager" is guilty of so many consistancy errors that I have no problem ignoring "evidence" from it.) This is, however, my own interpretation; use or ignore as you like.

I don't prejudice myself against data points because they come from any particular series. It was stated clearly and explicitly in an aired episode that Kirk's 5-year mission ended in 2270. This is not inconsistent with any reference in any other episode of any other series. Furthermore, it acknowledges the existence of the animated seasons. Why on Earth would anyone want to discredit it? [Wink]

quote:
The major one is that, whatever a prop might have said, the actual protrayal of Gary Mitchell is not of someone just a couple years out of the academy, or someone who had a subordinate, mentor/student relationship with Kirk. Rather, they were of an age, and close friends.

Mitchell's file was displayed prominently in the episode specifically for the audience to read, and there is nothing canonical which contradicts it. Moreover, I question your subjective interpretations of the actors' performances. Clearly the two men were the closest of friends, and this stemmed from their long acquaintance and their sharing of many adventures together, both professionally and personally. But witness these lines from the episode itself:

MITCHELL:
I remember you back at the academy...a stack of books with legs. The first thing I ever heard from upperclassmen was "Watch out for Lieutenant Kirk. In his class, you either think or sink."

KIRK:
I wasn't that bad was I?


This clearly indicates that Kirk was Mitchell's instructor from his initial arrival at the Academy, and that he was already a lieutenant at the time. There really isn't any arguing with it.

quote:
In the novel Strangers From The Sky (IMHO, the best Star Trek novel ever written), Mitchel is a year or two older than Kirk, who had only recently surpassed him in rank in his meteoric rise to captain. I love this book, precisely because Bonnano's characters and their relationships ring so true, and could never accept something so incompatible with her portrayal.
Unfortunately, I could never accept the words of a non-canonical novel---even the best one ever written---over onscreen fact.

quote:
Vonda McIntyre's novel Enterprise gives this ship a name, the USS Lydia Sutherland. Mitchel was Commander Kirk's XO. The ship is also mentioned briefly in McIntyre's novelization of Star Trek IV. I had no idea, before reading your post, that McIntyre's speculation had any basis in fact.
Always glad to bring something new to light. Hope I haven't seemed overly confrontational in this post. [Smile]

quote:
Originally posted by TSN:
Monkey: Your fourth scenario isn't really a cop-out. How can you cop out of an explanation when one isn't required in the first place? The lines were cut. The "explanation" is: Worf never made any claims to being an ensign at age 17 in the first place.

Tsk tsk, Timmy. Where's the fun (or the shiplist entry) in that? [Razz]

-MMoM [Big Grin]
 
Posted by Timo (Member # 245) on :
 
While I agree that Kirk must be Mitchell's senior in terms of Starfleet training, I must emphatically deny the onscreen reference to Mitchell's physical age. *NO WAY* this man was 23 during the episode. (Never mind the impossibility of achieving Lt.Cmdr rank at that age...)

The reference to an age of 23 Earth years is as insane as calling Dehner "21 years old". The only way to allow for these records (which get the heights of the characters wrong, too) is IMHO to say that these aren't Earth years at all. Either these are the years of their respective birth planets, or then "AGE" stands for "Average Growth Exponent" or something like that...

I'm happy to go with the concept that Mitchell is a bit older than Kirk. He would simply have entered the Academy at a slightly later age than Kirk.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
Where is this idea that Mitchell would be older than Kirk coming from? What ever suggested it, even discounting the age on his file? [Confused]

Gary Lockwood is younger than William Shatner by six years.
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
"Tsk tsk, Timmy. Where's the fun (or the shiplist entry) in that?"

Well, considering that you just said "I could never accept the words of a non-canonical novel---even the best one ever written---over onscreen fact", you suddenly seen very eager to accept other non-canon info. I mean, what can be more non-canon than something that they made a concious decision to explicitly not include on the show?
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
He's eager to accept background information which isn't contradicted by onscreen facts.
 
Posted by PsyLiam (Member # 73) on :
 
But only a cursory examination of those diplayed records shows them to be wrong. The heights are wrong. There is no way Dehner is 21. Look at the stardates of their birth: I know that the TOS system isn't the most consistent when it comes to this, but those stardates seem to indicate that both characters are less than two months old!

With regards to Preston: Surely a spoken line should be considered more important than a rank pin? Otherwise Tuvok is a Lt Commander at the beginning of Voyager, and Valeris is...whatever the hell she was. (This obviously discounts the rank-nightmare instance of O'Brien.)

quote:
This clearly indicates that Kirk was Mitchell's instructor from his initial arrival at the Academy, and that he was already a lieutenant at the time. There really isn't any arguing with it.
Or it could indicate that "Lieutenant Kirk" was a nickname...ie, that he was so cocky and full of himself that he acted like an already commissioned officer when he was still just a cadet.
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
With regards to Preston: Surely a spoken line should be considered more important than a rank pin?
It wasn't just Preston. Other enlisted trainees also wore rank insignia. I've read on several pages that there are Cadet Officers and Cadet NCOs, so maybe Preston was a Cadet Able'sman.

I don't think that dialogue should take precedence over rank pins, displays or whatever. Sometimes the dialogue is incorrect and sometimes the pins/displays are. We should decide which fact is more important from case to case.

BTW: I think the Axanar Peace Mission wasn't that important at all. Kirk's comment sounds more like he was defending politicans than referring specifically to the Axanar Mission.
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
With regards to Preston: Surely a spoken line should be considered more important than a rank pin?
It wasn't just Preston. Other enlisted trainees also wore rank insignia. I've read on several pages that there are Cadet Officers and Cadet NCOs, so maybe Preston was a Cadet Ables'man?

I don't think that dialogue should take precedence over rank pins, displays or whatever. Sometimes the dialogue is incorrect and sometimes the pins/displays are. We should decide which fact is more important from case to case.

BTW: I think the Axanar Peace Mission wasn't that important at all. Kirk's comment sounds more like he was defending politicans than referring specifically to the Axanar Mission.
 
Posted by newark (Member # 888) on :
 
Another chronological fact to take into consideration. In the briefing room, where the captain discusses the fate of Gary Mitchell, Dr. Dehner says Spock knew Mitchell for years which implies that Kirk's friend was aboard the Enterprise for at least two years. So, if the files are those for the USS Enterprise, then Gary Mitchell is twenty five at least and maybe a little older.
 
Posted by PsyLiam (Member # 73) on :
 
Those would be pretty bad records if they weren't updated when their information becomes out of date.

Although (and I'm sure this has come up before), what sort of record has an "age" catagory anyway? The only time that makes sense is if it is some sort of variable field constantly calculated by comparing the person's DOB with the current date. That has to be what the Enterprise was using (unless someone wants to argue that Spock had pulled up paper records), so either Mitchell is 23 at that moment in time, or the record's are silly and wrong.
 
Posted by Timo (Member # 245) on :
 
When the age issue was last discussed, it was suggested that the onset of psi abilities might be closely tied to age. Perhaps all other fields on these record cards (which do look like paper cards, with handwritten entries and all) are updated, but age refers to the age in which the assessment of psi potential was made?

As regards the ST2 Starfleet personnel, I think we should note that even though this was a training cruise, not everybody aboard would be a rookie! When Kirk asks Scotty whether his "cadets" could handle a little training cruise, he omits the fact that perhaps 80% of the crew is actually "veteran" already. And only a fraction of those for whom this trip represents "training" are true officer cadets, while others are enlisted trainees, and some seem to be postgrad officers like Saavik.

And Peter Preston need not be a trainee at all. When Kirk interviews him, he's self-identified as an already "graduated" enlisted man, not as a trainee or cadet of any sort, right? Kirk then asks whether this is his first training cruise, but the "yes" to that does not need to mean he would be the one who is being trained... This could be the first training cruise for McCoy, too, if you catch my drift.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Timo:
And Peter Preston need not be a trainee at all. When Kirk interviews him, he's self-identified as an already "graduated" enlisted man, not as a trainee or cadet of any sort, right?

Nope, he identified himself as a Midshipman 1st class.
 
Posted by Timo (Member # 245) on :
 
What? Doesn't he say "Engineer's Mate 1st Class"?

I don't remember ever hearing the word "midshipman" in aired Trek, despite it being an obvious Meyerism that probably was present in the scripts.

Timo Saloniemi
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Spike:
Nope, he identified himself as a Midshipman 1st class.

quote:
Originally posted by Timo:
What? Doesn't he say "Engineer's Mate 1st Class"?

 -
 
Posted by Manticore (Member # 1227) on :
 
Don'tcha just love contradictions in the same sentence? [Roll Eyes]

Maybe in Starfleet, midshipman for some inane reason refers to both enlisted trainees and officer cadets?
 
Posted by Dat (Member # 302) on :
 
I'm guessing Midshipman 1st Class is the designation of 4th year Adcademy cadet (at the time), while Engineer's Mate would just be a position aboard ship.
 
Posted by machf (Member # 1233) on :
 
Doesn't usually "midshipman" refer to, precisely, a cadet on a training cruise? That would be a rank (below ensign, as he/she hasn't become a commissioned officer yet), as opposed to a position. With "1st class" meaning he's in his last year at the academy.
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by machf:
Doesn't usually "midshipman" refer to, precisely, a cadet on a training cruise? That would be a rank (below ensign, as he/she hasn't become a commissioned officer yet), as opposed to a position. With "1st class" meaning he's in his last year at the academy.

Exactly.

Midshipman (TOS) - US Naval designation for 'trainees'.
Cadet (TNG) - US Air Force designation for 'trainees'.

Seemingly TOS had it right all along, because midshipman is consistant with the ensign through commodore to admiral designation corresponding to Naval tradition.

Then again we have the problem with Colonel West, whose rank of "colonel" is the US Air Force equilivent of the US Navy Captain.

Finally, reviewing some old Royal/US Navy traditions, with regards to Kirk and Saavik being Lieutenants in the Academy...there is the following example:

"Commissions to lieutenant were limited in the early navy, and a [midshipman] candidate had to wait until vacancies occured. To allow midshipmen to exercise more authority, those who had passed their examinations for lieutenant [at that time the lowest commissioned rank] were called 'passed midshipmen', and could serve as officers in the fleet until a lieutenant's (or, later, master's) vacancy opened. This title disappeared when the rank of ensign was authorized in 1862."

With that in mind, I have a theory. Assuming that both Kirk and Saavik were in the 'command program' and with 250 years of rank tweaking yet to come (and considering how much rank has changed in the last 150 years) perhaps cadets/midshipmen attending 'Command School' were given the Trek/Starfleet equivelant to 'passed midshipmen' and given the rank of Lieutenant while still in the Academy or still attending Command School. Having the rank Ensign in there kind of confuses the issue some, but at least TOS didn't utilize the Lt(j.g.) rank, or did they?

Anyway, thats my take on it. I guess you just have to keep in mind that 250 years of change 'yet to come' could still play a major role in what ranks an imaginary space organization may or may not use.
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
but at least TOS didn't utilize the Lt(j.g.) rank, or did they?
Yes, it did. Lt. JG Joe Tormolen for example.
 
Posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim (Member # 646) on :
 
TSN:
As to my take on scripts and deleted/cut scenes, hopefully I'll have the new format of my shiplist up and running soon enough, and then you shall see...

Futurama Guy:
No one said Kirk was a lieutenant while still attending the academy. I had hoped my little chronology would have cleared that up. He was an ensign, then presumably promoted to lieutenant junior grade on graduation, and then to lieutenant.

-MMoM [Big Grin]
 
Posted by machf (Member # 1233) on :
 
Hmmm... maybe to attend Command School they must have graduated from the Academy first (IOW, completed the usual 4 years and go for some more), and are appointed a temporary lieutenant rank...
("3rd lieutenant" or something like that would be my guess, based on Starship Troopers...)
 
Posted by Dat (Member # 302) on :
 
3rd Lieutenant doesn't really fit in with Trek officer/enlistee rankings.
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
First, apologies for my lately-come response. My internet connection got whacked yesterday morning.


Originally posted by The Mighty Monkey of Mim:
quote:
Where is this idea that Mitchell would be older than Kirk coming from? What ever suggested it, even discounting the age on his file? [Confused]

Gary Lockwood is younger than William Shatner by six years.

From the novel, as I said. Age is never specifically mentioned, but Mitchell repeatedly addresses Kirk as "kid," and although they are depicted as close friends rather than mentor/student, Mitchell is portrayed as being the more mature and wiser of the two, and Kirk is more often taking Mitchell's advice than the reverse.

And Lee Kelso is a closet Egyptologist. [Smile]


quote:
Hope I haven't seemed overly confrontational in this post. [Smile]
Not at all. I just disagree with you. [Smile]

Re Voyager, my reasoning goes something like this:


It may not be deductively valid, but it works for me.

And as for novels vs. TV as source material, I assume you don't favour the latter because you believe TV is an inherently superior medium, but rather aired episodes have some official stamp of approval that novels do not. I can't agree with this, because it's based on the assumption that TPTB know better than I do what is or is not a good addition to the Star Trek universe, and this is patently untrue.

[Big Grin]

Kidding aside, I do believe in evaluating contraditing ideas solely on merit, regardless of source. But that's my thing. By sharing my opinions I'm not trying to force them on anyone else, but rather offering them for others to use if they like, just as I swipe other peoples' ideas when I like them. Like the ideas, I mean, not the people. Not that I necessarily don't like the people. But this is getting silly. I'll shut up now.


Originally posted by Timo:
quote:
As regards the ST2 Starfleet personnel, I think we should note that even though this was a training cruise, not everybody aboard would be a rookie! When Kirk asks Scotty whether his "cadets" could handle a little training cruise, he omits the fact that perhaps 80% of the crew is actually "veteran" already.
When I say, "I'll shut up now," of course what I mean is, "I'll start talking about something else." [Smile]

On what do you base the idea that the Enterprise had a full regular crew on board? My impression was always that she had had been assigned to the Academy as a training ship, and had only a skeleton crew of regulars on board to train the cadets. Remeber McCoy's line about putting an experienced crew back on the Enterprise? Most of the crew in the background are wearing training uniforms.

(A nice detail in the "Khan shoots up the engine room" scene is that all the people grabbing oxygen masks are experienced crewmen.)


quote:
And Peter Preston need not be a trainee at all. [SNIP]
Way to think outside the box. [Smile]

But I can't agree. #1, he's wearing a trainee uniform. Note the red collar. And #2, "engineer's mate" is usually an enlisted man's job (as Manticore pointed out).

Besides, being the green as hell newb is the whole point of his role in the film. Along with Saavik, he puts a face on Spock's "trainee crew," who would otherwise be nameless extras in the background, ignored by the audience except as window dressing for the familiar main characters.

IHMO, the "midshipman" reference is the screw up. He's an enlisted trainee on his first cruise.


Marian
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
Originally posted by Spike:
quote:
quote:
but at least TOS didn't utilize the Lt(j.g.) rank, or did they?
Yes, it did. Lt. JG Joe Tormolen for example.
It was TMP that didn't have a lieutenant J.G. rank. [Shameless plug]See my "Staffing Requirements" thread for discussion of it[/shameless plug].


Marian
 
Posted by machf (Member # 1233) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Dat:
3rd Lieutenant doesn't really fit in with Trek officer/enlistee rankings.

I know it may not fit with the Trek rankings, but it does fit with the equivalents in some of the navies of today (which use "1st lieutenant" and "2nd lieutenant" instead of "lieutenant" and "lieutenant, j.g."). Hence the "or something like that" part in my original post.
 
Posted by Dat (Member # 302) on :
 
But 3rd Lieutenant indicates a third lieutenant rank, of which I don't know of any navy (or any other armed force) that has one.
 
Posted by Harry (Member # 265) on :
 
The Dutch Royal Navy has a Third Lieutenant rank. It's equivalent to Ensign. Second Lieutenant is equivalent to Lieutenant JG, Second Lieutenant (Senior Grade) to Lieutenant and First Lieutenant to LT-Commander. Then there's even a Captain-Lieutenant rank, equivalent to Commander.
 
Posted by B.J. (Member # 858) on :
 
Ergh. I would imagine there's quite a bit of confusion in the Dutch Royal Navy.

anyone: "Lieutenant!"
entire ship: "YES?"

B.J.
 
Posted by PsyLiam (Member # 73) on :
 
Why does "Lieutenant" always look wrong when spelled out fully?

So does the Dutch navy not have a commander rank at all? Does it go First Lt -> Capt-Lt -> Capt?
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
"Why does 'Lieutenant' always look wrong when spelled out fully?"

Because, inexplicably, the British think it has an 'f' in it?
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
Originally posted by PsyLiam:
quote:
Why does "Lieutenant" always look wrong when spelled out fully?
Your boring trivia minutae for the day:

A lieutenant was originally an assistant to a senior officer, back in the days when commanders were too aristocratic to be bothered with things like training, provisioning, or barracks discipline. Between battles, while they were off intriguing at court, they left behind a tenant who would oversee matters in lieu of them.

Hence the term.


[Smile]
Marian
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by TSN:
"Why does 'Lieutenant' always look wrong when spelled out fully?"

Because, inexplicably, the British think it has an 'f' in it?

I always thought the British use "L'tenant" for Army officers and "Leftenant" for Navy officers.

quote:
So does the Dutch navy not have a commander rank at all? Does it go First Lt -> Capt-Lt -> Capt?
Yep.

http://www.rankinsignia.info/show.php?podkategorie=Vloot%20-%20Royal%20Netherlands%20Navy&stat=Netherlands&id=78

German Navy ranks are also odd compared to RN or USN ranks. They have Captain Lieutenant > Corvette Captain > Frigate Captain > Captain.
 
Posted by MirrorCaptainMike (Member # 709) on :
 
one thing i noticed when writing an article on rank in Star Trek:

we know that the rank of Lt. JG exists in Trek, we've seen the insignia on almost all the uniform design schemes, i've seen in mentioned in novels & publications, but is there any canonical mention of the term 'junior grade' ? in either dialogue or in a background readout somewhere??
 
Posted by PsyLiam (Member # 73) on :
 
Was it said in "Tapestry"? I'm sure I've heard it once.

quote:
Originally posted by Spike:
I always thought the British use "L'tenant" for Army officers and "Leftenant" for Navy officers.

Where on earth would you get a silly idea like that? Did you never watch Blackadder Goes Forth?

In any case, no-one says "l'tenant." "Loo-tenant" is closer to the American pronounciation.
 
Posted by MarianLH (Member # 1102) on :
 
Originally posted by MirrorCaptainMike:
quote:
one thing i noticed when writing an article on rank in Star Trek:

we know that the rank of Lt. JG exists in Trek, we've seen the insignia on almost all the uniform design schemes, i've seen in mentioned in novels & publications, but is there any canonical mention of the term 'junior grade' ? in either dialogue or in a background readout somewhere??

Um, what else would it stand for? Juniper grove? Jaded geek?


[Smile]
Marian
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
"'Loo-tenant' is closer to the American pronounciation."

Ah, that's why you added an 'f' sound. Otherwise, you'd think it sounded like someone who lives in a toilet.
 
Posted by Reverend (Member # 335) on :
 
Worf definatly called Picard a 'Loo-tenant', Junior Grade in "Tapestry".
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by MarianLH:
Originally posted by MirrorCaptainMike:
quote:
one thing i noticed when writing an article on rank in Star Trek:

we know that the rank of Lt. JG exists in Trek, we've seen the insignia on almost all the uniform design schemes, i've seen in mentioned in novels & publications, but is there any canonical mention of the term 'junior grade' ? in either dialogue or in a background readout somewhere??

Um, what else would it stand for? Juniper grove? Jaded geek?


[Smile]
Marian

Erm, he meant all of the signs pointed to the existance of the rank...as in the pips and so forth...but was the term ever explicitly stated "Lieutenant Junior Grade" or even "J.G." in any episode...not what J.G. stood for... [Roll Eyes]


....which the Reverend of Soul just pointed out was said.
 
Posted by Captain Boh (Member # 1282) on :
 
When I was really little, I thought it was Janitor Grade
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
So you just figured it out last year, didja? Good for you! [Smile]
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by PsyLiam:
quote:
Originally posted by Spike:
I always thought the British use "L'tenant" for Army officers and "Leftenant" for Navy officers.

Where on earth would you get a silly idea like that?
Sorry, got mixed up. The pronunciation "Leftant" is used for Army officers and "L'tenant" for Navy officers.
 
Posted by machf (Member # 1233) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by Spike:
quote:
Originally posted by TSN:
"Why does 'Lieutenant' always look wrong when spelled out fully?"

Because, inexplicably, the British think it has an 'f' in it?

I always thought the British use "L'tenant" for Army officers and "Leftenant" for Navy officers.

quote:
So does the Dutch navy not have a commander rank at all? Does it go First Lt -> Capt-Lt -> Capt?
Yep.

http://www.rankinsignia.info/show.php?podkategorie=Vloot%20-%20Royal%20Netherlands%20Navy&stat=Netherlands&id=78

German Navy ranks are also odd compared to RN or USN ranks. They have Captain Lieutenant > Corvette Captain > Frigate Captain > Captain.

Around here, the navy has the ranks of: Ensign, 2nd Lieutenant, 1st Lieutenant, Corvette Captain, Frigate Captain, Ship(?) Captain (Capit�n de Nav�o).

Of course, "Ensign" replaced "3rd Lieutenant" a really long time ago in most navies. However, my original point is that graduated cadets attending command school may be addressed as something like that, since once they graduate from there they certainly won't become just ensigns...
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
quote:
Originally posted by MirrorCaptainMike:

-> a rarely mentioned tidbit is that Peter Preston was supposed to be a 15 or 16 year old cadet in original drafts of TWOK, reinforcing the horatio hornblower influences on that flm...

According to the script, he was supposed to be 14, not to nitpick. [Smile]
 
Posted by Jason Abbadon (Member # 882) on :
 
A 14 year old serving is idiotic.
Even 16 is really pushing it.
 
Posted by Captain Boh (Member # 1282) on :
 
Well, when they teach Calculus at... what 10? [Wink]
 
Posted by Toadkiller (Member # 425) on :
 
I think that was drawing on the whole "Hornblower" thing with Middie's starting at 10 or so....

But it is silly.
 
Posted by Futurama Guy (Member # 968) on :
 
Marby there is some "Military School" arc to that or part of some Tech. Ed. classes or other program. It was a training cruise, afterall.
 
Posted by Sol System (Member # 30) on :
 
Well, it isn't silly so much as it is historical and, if you prefer, anachronistic. (But then, anachronistic to today, or to the fictional future?)
 
Posted by PsyLiam (Member # 73) on :
 
Stop being smart.
quote:
Originally posted by Spike:
Sorry, got mixed up. The pronunciation "Leftant" is used for Army officers and "L'tenant" for Navy officers.

Are you sure? I've never heard it.

"L'tenant" sounds French. And I don't think anyone says "Leftant".
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
Well, since the word itself is French, I'd say they probably use the "lyoo-" pronunciation.
 
Posted by Harry (Member # 265) on :
 
I've certainly heard it pronounced something very similar to 'left handed'.
 
Posted by Spike (Member # 322) on :
 
quote:
Are you sure? I've never heard it.
Yep. It's mentioned on the RN homepage:
http://www.royal-navy.mod.uk/static/pages/4754.html
 
Posted by Dat (Member # 302) on :
 
quote:
LOOTERNANT in the U.S. Navy.
Um, I thought it was pronounced LOOTENNENT. Where did the RN get its people from? No disrespect of course.
 
Posted by Capped in Mike (Member # 709) on :
 
Hi, my name is Ensign Lou Tennant.
 
Posted by Jason Abbadon (Member # 882) on :
 
I'm from sweden: my name's Hans Olo.
 
Posted by TSN (Member # 31) on :
 
"Um, I thought it was pronounced LOOTENNENT."

More or less. There's certainly no 'r' sound. I'm not sure I'd trust that site.
 
Posted by Cartman (Member # 256) on :
 
"I'm from sweden: my name's Hans Olo"

That's it. You know what you just did, right? RIGHT? Yeah, I thought so.

Roger Murdock: We have clearance Clarence.
Captain Oveur: Roger, Roger. What's our vector Victor?
Tower voice: Tower's radio clearance, over!
Captain Oveur: That's Clarence Oveur! Oveur.
Tower voice: Roger.
Roger Murdock: Huh?
Tower voice: Roger, over.
Roger Murdock: Huh?
Captain Oveur: Huh?
 
Posted by Jason Abbadon (Member # 882) on :
 
HA!
I haven't laughed so hard since....Macho Grande.
 
Posted by Topher (Member # 71) on :
 
I always laugh histarically for a good rendition of Who's on first
 


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