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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Omega: [QB] [i]he finally tells his friend what he is in prison for: he's a Christian.[/i] He's there because he's a Christian. What, they don't teach colons any more in school? ;-) [Side note: Either Tim or Liam is going to come in here and make some sort of joke about the assholes they knew in highschool. Be prepared.] It's a Twilight Zone kinda thing. For over two thirds of the skit, the judges will have no idea how this fits into the theme. The guards treat him horribly, and his parents react as if his crime is something they'd disown him over. Then the twist: he's not there because he's a murderer or a rapist; he's a Christian. Remember what I once told you, Jeff? I'm looking for emotional reaction when I'm telling my story. Impact is everything. [/QB][/QUOTE]
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