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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Omega: [QB] [i]Is there anyway you could at least TRY to present two sides of an argument? At all??[/i] The other side of the argument being that facism is a good thing? That the invariably resulting horrors are not quite so horrible, and not a thing to be avoided? I find it difficult to present, as a rational argument, that which is not one. [i]And there's really no conflict to it. Drama is conflict. Without conflict, you don't have a play.[/i] We didn't have such a conflict last year and we won. :) Remember, we've got, like, ten minutes to do this. This isn't "Lord of the Rings". It's just a short morality play. [i]Also, the dialogue could use a little tightening. Try to listen to the way people talk in real life, today, around you and imitate that style.[/i] I did that. I specifically avoided using my own speech patterns. :) Any specific area you think needs work with that? [/QB][/QUOTE]
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