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[QUOTE]Originally posted by OnToMars: [QB] Bearing in mind this is going against my better judgement and my policy of encouraging the oppression of rationality. I do however support the propogation of art as an examination of humanity. Even if the examination is flawed. [QUOTE] The other side of the argument being that facism is a good thing? That the invariably resulting horrors are not quite so horrible, and not a thing to be avoided? [/QUOTE]The other side that secular government might not be such a horrible thing. [QUOTE] I find it difficult to present, as a rational argument, that which is not one. [/QUOTE]I won't say it...I won't say it...I won't say it... [QUOTE] We didn't have such a conflict last year and we won. [/QUOTE]Well, I doubt it's the Pulitzer committee you're trying to win over. :) [QUOTE] Well, why were they in here, then? [/QUOTE]Well or then. One or the other. [QUOTE] But� but� how� [/QUOTE]But...how? Stuttering usually doesn't work out. Generally, tightening dialogue is really just getting rid of unneccessary so's, well's, then's, etc. Anyway, you got five scenes, which is a pretty substantial one act play. It's tough to pull off, but good stuff can be written in one act. Nobody's expecting you to be Samuel Beckett, but hey, there's always room for improvement. *patiently awaiting the Quantum Leap joke* [/QB][/QUOTE]
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