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[QUOTE]Originally posted by grb: [QB] Perhaps wo8uld the corruption be connected with the coruption in insurrection? I hope that this time we'd get to see the federation council and regular federation citizen's reaction to things. Maybe the corruption could somehow happen on the federation member worlds. Wait, i suddenly got an idea.... Star Trek: (pretty nifty title, i don;t know what)) Voice over..."On the eve of a great return...." View of a bunch of starships flying into formation voice over....".....a great discovery....." All of this light stuff coming out of this sphere thingy "will change the galaxy...." a bunch of people standing in fr0nt of a big building "for good" a cheering crowd "or for bad" night time, that same big building explodes "a threat is coming to the final frontier" this alien army comes of of the sphere "that cannot be stopped" picard looks all worried at something, we don;t see what the federation council president, in front of the council, shot down by some type of energy beam "On december 10th, 2000, the threat is com9ing" picard, to the federation council "it must be stopped" one of those alien dudes "we can not be beaten" the alienb arym marching picard "no!" troi "I feel...anger!" data "it..." bunch of laser beams and stuff data "...is..." a federation fleet with all of its ships burning data "...coming..." more buildings expldiong, protestors screaming as the lasers split them apart, the council stadning, the fleet attacking some other ships, the symbol of the UFP... alien soldier "victory is ours" the UFP symbol starting to burn well, that';s the preview. The story wpoudl go something like this..... A federation exp[edition (that big fleet flying in formation) returns from the large magelantic cloud, a nearby galaxy (the fleet got there using transwarp drive). picard and the enterprise come to earth to greet them back. the fleet presents this weird diuscovery (that sphere of light) to the federation council. The enterprise stays near earth along with the expedition fleet, kinda looking over stuff and going to parades, because this expedition was pretty famous with the common federation citizens. Suddenly, there is an anouncement: the federation council is turing control of the federation over to these alines, who starts coming out of the sphere. Starfleet doesn;t do anything, they're all in agreement with the council. federation citizens protest, but they are shot down by eoither starfleet or the aliens. The enterprise deosn;t know what to do. They seem to be the only starfleeet ship that isnp;t very happy. cause, see, for a long time, the enterprise has been on an expedition to the center of the galaxy (they were using the slipstream drive). So the enterprise now goes and hides with this rebelion of federation citizens. They find out that, for a long time, these aliens have knwon about the federation and have been trying to take it over. They engineered that whole ba'ku oncoident in "insurection" because thhey wanted those strange particle thingys. Anyway, starfleet comes and destoys the little rebelion thingy. The enterprise sneeks back to earth, and finbds out that th alines have blown up the fedceration council, which was only giving power to the aliens to save the people of the federation. The enterpirse sets up a secret rebellion on earth. The enterprise then coordiantes rebellions on all of the federation wortlds. Just as the alines are about to kill every federation citizen to make room for their own colonization, the federartion rebels, and the day is saved. Kinda nifty, but probabably too dark...... [/QB][/QUOTE]
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