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[QUOTE]Originally posted by MrNeutron: [QB] [QUOTE]Originally posted by Kazeite: [qb] To comment on the Exter movie, the sets are amazing, costumes are very good, SFX are ok, acting is average, and script is awful :) [/qb][/QUOTE]The sets would be amazing if the bridge wasn't a cheap model chromakeyed behind the actors. The costumes are very good. The SFX are weak...the movement is choppy and the lighting choices are bad. The acting is is average for local theater. The script is putrid. Part of the problem is that the guys writing the scripts don't have a grasp on story construction, dramatic arcs, or even basic plotting. Their script for "The Mighty Galvanaut" is worse than the episode already made. In short, a lot happens, but nothing happens. In other words, there are a lot of scenes, but there's no point, and the scenes don't build up to anything. Worse, the characters bicker and tease like high school students, and this is all that passes for characterization. What I think is funny is they plan to do a "series" about this Galvanaut character...so they're going to use their 2nd or 3rd Exeter film to make a "pilot"! haha Don't get me wrong: I admire their enthusiasm and StickToIt-iveness, but they really need better scripts. Actually, I was toying with offering them my services on a script, just for giggles. (I wrote several spec TNG scripts and submitted them in 1989-90...didn't sell any of them, but one of them is amongst the best things I've ever written...but I submitted it to TNG right at the time they produced "Sins of the Father", and my story was a Klingon episode that took a different tack...ah well!) [QUOTE][qb]To comment on Constitution... briliant. Simply briliant :) [/qb][/QUOTE]And just what is this "Constituion" you say is brilliant? [/QB][/QUOTE]
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