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[QUOTE]Originally posted by wingsabre: [QB] I think the design�s ok, not that unique, memorizing, eloquent, and sleek. It�s kind of clunky. I would have made a few changes: 1. Incorporate the catamaran a little more to look less catamaran-like. For example I would have curved the inner parts towards the bridge section, so it�ll look like three bumps from a foreword view. This would not just make it look less like the Akira it would be more accessible for the crew. 2. I would then add shuttlebays on the ends of each catamaran. They would be more reasonable for shuttling cargos and to hold average size shuttles. The rear shuttlebay seems really large, and since this is a long range exploration vehicle should house large long range exploration vehicles like runabouts, venture class, delta flyer size ships for long range exploration. The ship would then serve as a central hub for the different long range teams. Also because the rear bay would hold larger ships, it would explain the long runway. 3. I think the silhouette is ugly, so to correct this, I�d first fix the pod or just remove it. Other than being cumbersome for the crew it seems to just stick out and not flow with the rest of the ship. To fix it, I would just push it a little further back, and make the sails more curved. Maybe an arch backwards, and lower the height so it would look more sleek. It might look better if there were three supports rather than two, mainly because we�ve always seen two. If the pod is removed then the ship as a whole would look more sleek. 4. The nacelles are very Akira like, so make it thinner and sharper near the end, and have the bussard collector more angled and less circular. I would have its height reduced so I could see the change in shape of the engineering hull. Not only will it look different from the nacelles from the Akira class, the silhouette would look less like an ink blob and the saucer, engineering section, and nacelles would seem more definable. By the way, I agree. Based on the runner-ups this design is by far the best design out of the mix. [/QB][/QUOTE]
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