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Wes
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Well, ive never really created anything for this era, so, today I sat down and took a shot at it. Of course this isnt really original at all, but hey, i wanted to get the look and feel down. Let me know what you think!

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Why do something that has been done time and time again? Could you not have picked a better ship? Let's be honest, the NCC-1701-A is shit.
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...!

I can't believe you said that...

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Wes
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Wow. I actually love the Enterprise-A -- seeing it on TV or DVD brings back fond memories.
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Dat
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While I think it's a good design, it could do with some improvements. Some are a thicker neck, better phaser coverage, and aft torpedo coverage

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quote:
Originally posted by aneurysm:
Why do something that has been done time and time again? Could you not have picked a better ship? Let's be honest, the NCC-1701-A is shit.

Bah! The NCC-1701-A/refit has been the best ship in Trek - beautiful, elegant, functional, sleek, brilliant!

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Jason Abbadon
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quote:
Originally posted by Dat:
While I think it's a good design, it could do with some improvements. Some are a thicker neck, better phaser coverage, and aft torpedo coverage

I agree: Improvment #1 needs to be the thickening of those scrawny nacelle pylon connections to the secondary hull!!
If that "near miss" torpedo would've struck the pylon in STII, the entire nacelle probably would've been blown off!

Man, I hate that part of the design!

It would be nice to have an aft torpedo as well: the ship's rear is pretty light on armament.

And thicken up the neck!

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Heretics. Apostates. You probably litter candy wrappers too. Leave her alone. She's beautiful and perfect as she is.

She is and always will be the best Star Trek ship ever designed. As the VFX people admitted when they ripped it off to design the Sovereign class. [Smile]

Wes, you did get a few details wrong. Off the top of my head:
  • Navigaton dome is the TOS version; the movie version is different.
  • The equipment detail on the undercut is wrong.
  • I could be wrong, but eyeballs-only the proportions of the botanical section windows are off


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quote:
Originally posted by aneurysm:
Why do something that has been done time and time again? Could you not have picked a better ship? Let's be honest, the NCC-1701-A is shit.

Blasphemy!

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MarianLH
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Originally posted by Jason Abbadon:
quote:
Improvment #1 needs to be the thickening of those scrawny nacelle pylon connections to the secondary hull!!
If that "near miss" torpedo would've struck the pylon in STII, the entire nacelle probably would've been blown off!

Yeah, cus the wider pylon helped Reliant hold on to her nacelle when it was hit by a torpedo...

...NOT!


[Big Grin]
Marian


PS: The original Enterprise did just fine without an aft torpedo. She's an explorer, not a warship.

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quote:
Originally posted by Reverend:
quote:
Originally posted by aneurysm:
Why do something that has been done time and time again? Could you not have picked a better ship? Let's be honest, the NCC-1701-A is shit.

Blasphemy!
BURN THE Blasphemer!!! NO ONE expects the Spanish Inquisition!
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Cartman
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Explorers should ideally be as heavily armed as their spaceframes will tolerate, though.
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Dat
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quote:
Originally posted by MarianLH:
Originally posted by Jason Abbadon:
quote:
Improvment #1 needs to be the thickening of those scrawny nacelle pylon connections to the secondary hull!!
If that "near miss" torpedo would've struck the pylon in STII, the entire nacelle probably would've been blown off!

Yeah, cus the wider pylon helped Reliant hold on to her nacelle when it was hit by a torpedo...

...NOT!


[Big Grin]
Marian


PS: The original Enterprise did just fine without an aft torpedo. She's an explorer, not a warship.

Well, he meant a thicker pylon. And the E-D was also an explorer, and she had families and better weapons coverage, including an aft launcher.

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whats thatr sticking out of the aft cutout?
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Nim
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A very nice drawing, Wes, I especially like the shadow work.

If you're going to do another sideview, my pick would be the Ambassador Refit.
I've studied the sideviews of all starfleet ships and come to the conclusion that it is the nicest. Especially the little bulge under the aft shuttle bay. Almost sensual in its curve, like a soft hip.

After looking at it for a while and then switching over to a Constitution sideview, the Connie looks like a turd with "shrunken-saucer" complex in comparison.

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