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Post A Reply Login Name: Password: Message: HTML is enabled. UBB Code™ is enabled. [QUOTE]Originally posted by Masao: [QB] Nice ship, Harry. Weren't you the one complaining a few weeks ago that you were out of ideas? I'd leave the nacelles where they are, sitting right above the saucer. Some nitpicky drawing stuff You need a ring indicating the outer edge of the flat part on the top of the bridge (outside the dome). Also, some lines are needed to indicate the intersection of the secondary hull with the flat part of the big primary hull mound. Now you have them merging together with just a shadow. If this is a science ship, maybe some more sensor panels on the flat part of the primary hull.? I would also make the base of the main deflector more complex. Instead of just sticking the dish on to the hull, add some of those concentric rings. Also, since the mounting of the dish is in a little cave, you need to indicate the edge of hull at the cave opening and throw the cave into shadow. The L-shaped things beside the bridge are located near the impulse deck on Enterprise, so I assume they have something to do with the drive. For your ACI emblem, I suggest you open up the lettering a bit more, especially for "institute." BTW: Your scale bar is confusing. It's labeled 50 meters, but is divided into four sections (of 12.5 m each?). Also, the abbreviation for meter is a lower case m, not a capital M (which means 1 million). [/QB][/QUOTE]

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