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[QUOTE]Originally posted by TORI: [QB] 148 The crystal-clear shot of Carson was eclipsed by a close-up of Tessa, eyes wide with amazement and about to burst out laughing, just as Creedmore found one of the nipples he was after, and Chevette, in pure reflex, let go of his neck with her left arm and punched him, as hard and as discreetly as possible, in the ribs, going in with all the knuckle she could leverage. ??? with all the knuckle she could leverage = with as many knuckles of her fist as possible? 149 Turning to see a face she knew, though she couldn't put a name to it. Ragged pale hair above a thin hard face, bad scar snaking his left cheek. A sometime messenger from her Allied days, not part of her crew but a face from parties. "Heron," the name came to her. "I thought you were gone," Heron said, displaying broken teeth. Maybe something broken in his head too, it struck her. Or maybe just some substance, tonight. ??? Ragged = cut unevenly ??? broken - I feel the resonance with the "broken" in the next sentence, I just want to be sure - it was "ragged" or "misaligned", right? 229 Rydell turned, hand pressed into his side. "Got any adhesive tape? The wide kind?" Fontaine did have a first-aid kit, but it never had anything anyone ever needed. He had a couple of crumbling wound compresses circa about 1978 in there and an elaborate industrial eye bandage with instructions in what looked like Finnish. [/QB][/QUOTE]
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