The Final Frontier.
This is the mission of the USS Tokyo: to seek out new allies, and heal the wounds of war. To eliminate the enemies of the Federation, both within and without.
But above all that: to boldly go where no one has gone before.
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Star Trek Gamma Quadrant
Average Rated 6.27 out of 10 Smileys by Fabrux (with four eps posted)
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"Oh, yes, screw logic, let's go for a theory with no evidence!"
-Omega 11:48am, Jan. 19th, 2001
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"The candidate who slimed John McCain in the primaries and smeared Al Gore in the general election is now the president who pledges to elevate the nation's tone and bring civility to our discorse. Kind of like Michael Corleone brought peace to the mob by killing the heads of the other four families."
--Paul Begala, Is Our Children Learning?
"Within and without"? What happened to "Both foreign and domestic"? I thought you good ol' boys loved to utter those words...
Second, if you don't mind, what is this monologue for? Are you writing a shortstory?
Is it about a Starfleet death squad, specializing on preemptive strikes at naughty neighbours?
And you realize that three sentences of the monologue already have been used in two other shows?
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Don't kill me, I'm charming!
[This message has been edited by Nimrod (edited March 11, 2001).]
Space.
The Final Frontier.
This is the mission of the USS Tokyo: to seek out new allies, and heal the wounds of war. To identify the enemies of the Federation, foreign and domestic.
But above all that: to boldly go where no one has gone before.
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Star Trek Gamma Quadrant
Average Rated 6.27 out of 10 Smileys by Fabrux (with four eps posted)
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"Oh, yes, screw logic, let's go for a theory with no evidence!"
-Omega 11:48am, Jan. 19th, 2001
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"The candidate who slimed John McCain in the primaries and smeared Al Gore in the general election is now the president who pledges to elevate the nation's tone and bring civility to our discorse. Kind of like Michael Corleone brought peace to the mob by killing the heads of the other four families."
--Paul Begala, Is Our Children Learning?
I'm gonna do it...
"This is the mission of the Tokyo: Find allies, eliminate enemies. No, TWO missions: Find allies, eliminate enemies, heal wounds of warTHREE missions: Find allies, eliminate enemies, heal wounds of war, and getting their crew ho-*sigh* I'll come in again!
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Don't kill me, I'm charming!
[This message has been edited by Nimrod (edited March 11, 2001).]
[This message has been edited by Fabrux (edited March 11, 2001).]
[This message has been edited by Nimrod (edited March 11, 2001).]
"identify the enemies" just doesn't have a ring to it.
"to defend the Federation against all enemies, foreign and domestic?"
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The government that seems the most unwise, oft goodness to the people best supplies. That which is meddling, touching everything, will work but ill, and disappointment bring. - The Tao Te Ching
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"...I know this board in secret, intimate ways which are beyond your comprehension.... Let's just say that people should *not* be telling me what to do; it should always be the other way around."
-"Red Quacker", conspiracy theorist and contemporary lunatic
The Final Frontier.
This is the mission of the USS Tokyo: to seek out new allies, and heal the wounds of war. To defend the Federation from all enemies, foreign and domestic.
But above all that: to boldly go where no one has gone before.
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Star Trek Gamma Quadrant
Average Rated 6.27 out of 10 Smileys by Fabrux (with four eps posted)
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"Oh, yes, screw logic, let's go for a theory with no evidence!"
-Omega 11:48am, Jan. 19th, 2001
****
"The candidate who slimed John McCain in the primaries and smeared Al Gore in the general election is now the president who pledges to elevate the nation's tone and bring civility to our discorse. Kind of like Michael Corleone brought peace to the mob by killing the heads of the other four families."
--Paul Begala, Is Our Children Learning?
I don't think this flows. I can't think of anything different right now, but if you say this sentence aloud, it's a little akward.
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"I WANT A POST VOY SERIES STAR TREK ORIGINAL MESSAGE WAS LOOKING FORWARD NOT LOOKING BACK."
-Darkstar
"Space...the final frontier. These are the voyages of the Starship Tokyo. Her mission: to carry the banner of peace to the far reaches of the galaxy, to expand the horizons of human knowledge...to boldly go where no one has gone before."
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"For people with resources, the right events happen. They may look like coincidences, but they arise out of necessity." --T�rk Hviid
[This message has been edited by Ultra Magnus (edited March 11, 2001).]
What's wrong with the domestication? You want "enemies, here and there"? Ok, so the old thing refers to countries, borders and continents, I joked about it mostly, if you didn't notice. Isn't it part of some military oath? The SEALSes perhaps?
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Don't kill me, I'm charming!