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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Jason Abbadon: [QB] Hmmm.....I think your territories for the Tholians and Breen are probably twice as large as they should be considering the isolationist and unknown natures of those races. THe Mirak and Hydrans were both "copyright friendly" versions of the Kzin, I thought.... I could be mistaken though. I cant imagine the Talarians hold that much space with the Cardassians right there: they're a bunch of pussies by TNG standards. Really, it looks like the bottom right quadrant of races woyld have to be much closer to sol given that there's been conflict iwth them for over 100 years and the Fed would not have explored that far out back in the TMP era. The Tkon Empire should be up "north" probably- or else Enterprise D would not have been in position for that season 2 encounter with the Romulans over Iconia: it's too far away for the distance covered to work...and the Neutralzone should be far larger to accomidate that giagntic shared border with the Fed. Even bringing Quo'nos soi much closer to Sol, two weeks for NX-01 to get there at warp 4 is bullshit. I think you should spread out the core Federation worlds further: with them so close, everything else seems spread thin and it's unrealistic (I know it's fiction, but c'mon!). Betazed should be close to wherever Tellar, Vulcan and Andor end up- those really [i]should[/i] be close together. I think there should be a [b]lot[/b] more black betweeen major empires representing unclaimed or neutral space: else story's like The Pegasus would not work and exploration would be just about impossible without violating someone's territory. Whoever could encapsule the other's territory would have the supreme advantage in your chart system- it's too confined. Not to discourage you: it's a hell of a start. :D [/QB][/QUOTE]
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