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Moonlight streaming between the blinds, Down a curve, shifting into fourth. Cat asleep on the futon, tail twitching, Frozen in my headlights, eyes meet.
The honk on the street, the noise from above, Impact. Steering lost, fighting for control. The light touch of wind from the fan, Over, on the curb, the deer, fighting to stand.
This is an assignment from my writing class this summer (getting a "heads up" on switching majors, wouldn't you know...)
We wrote one poem about a nice place. That poem was:
Moonlight streaming between the blinds, Cat asleep on the futon, tail twitching, The honk on the street, the noise from above, The light touch of wind from the fan,
Then, we wrote a poem about a scary moment. That poem was:
Down a curve, shifting into fourth. Frozen in my headlights, eyes meet. Impact. Steering lost, fighting for control. Over, on the curb, the deer, fighting to stand.
Our assignment was to combine the two. Whatdya' think? (Relax! I didn't hit another deer...)
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Interesting... very interesting... *always wanted to do that*
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Nice one, Sol. The first one to come to my mind was "Though, a theer, a female theer"
-------------------- "Out of doubt, out of dark to the day's rising I came singing in the sun, sword unsheathing. To hope's end I rode and to heart's breaking: Now for wrath, now for ruin and a red nightfall!"
The Battle of the Pelennor Fields.
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Hey! The smell coming from over here is from Monty. Who's Scottish. And not here to defend himself.
Ha! I = Master of blaming others!
-------------------- Yes, you're despicable, and... and picable... and... and you're definitely, definitely despicable. How a person can get so despicable in one lifetime is beyond me. It isn't as though I haven't met a lot of people. Goodness knows it isn't that. It isn't just that... it isn't... it's... it's despicable.