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Malnurtured Snay
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Moonlight streaming between the blinds,
Down a curve, shifting into fourth.
Cat asleep on the futon, tail twitching,
Frozen in my headlights, eyes meet.

The honk on the street, the noise from above,
Impact. Steering lost, fighting for control.
The light touch of wind from the fan,
Over, on the curb, the deer, fighting to stand.

[ June 22, 2001: Message edited by: Jeff Kardde ]

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Shik
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Dear SINDRI....AGAIN?!?

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"The French have a saying: 'mise en place'—keep everything in its fucking place!"

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Nim
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Well that dear deer will have trouble "standing" up in a few seconds, eh?

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Mel Gibson, X-Men

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Malnurtured Snay
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Actually ...

This is an assignment from my writing class this summer (getting a "heads up" on switching majors, wouldn't you know...)

We wrote one poem about a nice place. That poem was:

Moonlight streaming between the blinds,
Cat asleep on the futon, tail twitching,
The honk on the street, the noise from above,
The light touch of wind from the fan,

Then, we wrote a poem about a scary moment. That poem was:

Down a curve, shifting into fourth.
Frozen in my headlights, eyes meet.
Impact. Steering lost, fighting for control.
Over, on the curb, the deer, fighting to stand.

Our assignment was to combine the two. Whatdya' think? (Relax! I didn't hit another deer...)

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Shik
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Wow...that's actually kinda cool. And oddly eerie how well they joined so easily.

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MC Infinity
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Interesting... very interesting...
*always wanted to do that*

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Me- Hi Jen! What's up!
Jen- You again??!?! Listen kid, I'm not interested in you. Stop bothering me, I'm a lot older than you and I have a boyfriend. How did you find my ICQ number anyways?
Me- Oh, so just cuz you're a movie star now, and you're new album made millions, you think you're too good for me?
Jen- Yes!!! Get it thorough your head! I am a person, I am not Jennifer Lopez the hottest woman on earth that everyone wants to sleep with, I'm a person, leave me alone!!!
Me- Fine! Be that way!
Me- Jen.... Where'd you go.... I love you... please come back.... please....

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TSN
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Except that, when you combine them, the bit about the cat makes no sense. :-)
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Sol System
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R is a good letter. You can get a lot of milage out of an R. A though, that's my favorite letter of all.
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The Talented Mr. Gurgeh
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Nice one, Sol. The first one to come to my mind was "Though, a theer, a female theer"

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"Out of doubt, out of dark to the day's rising
I came singing in the sun, sword unsheathing.
To hope's end I rode and to heart's breaking:
Now for wrath, now for ruin and a red nightfall!"

The Battle of the Pelennor Fields.

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Lee
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Ray, a raft of golden run?

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PsyLiam
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That sounded rather dirty.

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Yes, you're despicable, and... and picable... and... and you're definitely, definitely despicable. How a person can get so despicable in one lifetime is beyond me. It isn't as though I haven't met a lot of people. Goodness knows it isn't that. It isn't just that... it isn't... it's... it's despicable.

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Lee
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To you, EVERYTHING sounds dirty.

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PsyLiam
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I should clean my ears.

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Yes, you're despicable, and... and picable... and... and you're definitely, definitely despicable. How a person can get so despicable in one lifetime is beyond me. It isn't as though I haven't met a lot of people. Goodness knows it isn't that. It isn't just that... it isn't... it's... it's despicable.

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TSN
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And the rest of you. People are starting to complain about the smell...
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PsyLiam
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Hey! The smell coming from over here is from Monty. Who's Scottish. And not here to defend himself.

Ha! I = Master of blaming others!

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Yes, you're despicable, and... and picable... and... and you're definitely, definitely despicable. How a person can get so despicable in one lifetime is beyond me. It isn't as though I haven't met a lot of people. Goodness knows it isn't that. It isn't just that... it isn't... it's... it's despicable.


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