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Two men vie for the worship of a young lady in Roman times. They use comical methods to gain her eye, and the sly dialogue and crazy plots make the audience laugh. At the end, when the girl and guy fall in love and are given a Christian marriage, then sacrificed to lions, the audience can rejoice in knowing they live together in heaven.
Still a bit unfinished, but I figured, what the hey?
The first person who finds a pattern to the character names gets a free library card! But only if they live in Davidson county. Otherwise it's $20 a year.
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quote:nearest psych ward, regardless of whether their physically sick or not.
Yes, because psych wards treat people who aren't physically sick. Yes, really they do. They're not known for their surgical rooms, y'know.
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You spelled 'hear' wrong at the top of Scene 3.
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quote:I… remember one of my Elementary school teachers teaching us about it for a week or two
They're paid to teach. Not preach.
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quote:loose
If you meant to type 'lose', you need to loose (I mean, lose) an 'o' ...
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quote:Kate and I read the Bible together for hours. Richard did talk to the woman in 515 later that morning, and he learned the same things that we did.
So, if the old lady had handed them novelizations of the 'Star Wars' trilogy instead ...
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Darn. You know, I made quite a few changes to this script earlier today, but they apparently didn't save. Double-darn.
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Fixed and updated. NOW find the pattern in names.
[ January 16, 2002: Message edited by: Omega ]
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Even though no-one named "Somewhere" has ever been canonized, how could a place that locks up all Judeo-Christians have a hospital named after a saint?
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It was named before the facists gained power.
That, or you could say that it was named after a famous historical person, and that their religious persuasion was irrelevant.
But those are just rationalizations for my use of a joke. Anyone get it?
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Given that the theme and purpose of Omega's play is, as it were, written in stone, if you've got a problem with that aspect of it keep it to yourself.
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Just one point in an earlier post you said you wanted a comedy, guess you dropped that idea. To bad you already wrote it, a story about that walker guy might have worked. He chose god over his country and it lead to his downfall.
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