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Irishman
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Member # 1188

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I'm playing around with page layouts for my artwork and orthographic views.

Tell me what you think so far.

http://img27.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Irishman/layout.jpg

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AndrewR
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For a start it would be NV-class not "Intrepid Class" The NX-01 Enterprise isn't "Enterprise Class".

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Aban Rune
Former ascended being
Member # 226

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My thoughts exactly. Other than that, you're going to have to tell me what you're trying to lay out here. Is it a tech manual, a screen display... whatcha makin'?

If it's going to be a page of anything, I think it needs... more stuff on it. Maybe put the text in a box or something. I don't know. It's kinda empty. And it's not the right proportions for the page of a book.

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Harry
Stormwind City Guard
Member # 265

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"Solar Explorer" sounds like it is only an intrasystem ship.

I'd move the scalebar somewhere lower and closer to the schematic, and keep the text on one side.

And what really irks me is the totally different typeface in the lower bar.

And if it's supposed to be a 'real' in-Universe readout, you could try to make it look like the Constitution blueprints Scotty glances over in STVI.

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