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Masao
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A few nits:
I think the tag line in the sky is kinda hard to see.
I wonder about justifying all the type on the right like that. Aren't the small-print credits usually centered?
I agree that a fake rating is essential for all fake movie ads.

(All modern movie posters have to have big floating half heads)

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bX
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And while that can be cool, it's really not a brave choice and generally doesn't tell you anything at all about the movie except who's in it.

I like this poster a lot, Aban. Even with her anklet, it has sort of a technicolor classic feel to it. Maybe it's the awesome valise. Again, I take issue with the title (seems sort of one sided and not really focused on where they're going), but with the design I can find no fault. Really nice job on the compositing. I'd guessed that the color had been tweaked, but not that they didn't belong there. Terrific composition and excellent typography.

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Fantastic job indeed, and a very inventive idea! I'm ok without a rating, it clearly still has the feel of a movie poster without it- a rating on the poster would be like rating the marriage.
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AndrewR
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What about E: Exempt from classification.
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Aban Rune
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Masao: The tag line in the sky is only hard to read in the small version I posted. It's quite legible in the printed version.

I did a bunch of research on the credits at the bottom, both for this one and for mine. I was under the impression that they were usually centered, but I've seen them printed every which way, including right justified, so I decided it was fine, and it just so happened to go great with the background photo.

BX: The title wasn't my choice this time. The client (the bride's mom) had it chosen already. The bride's last name is Hunt. So get it... she's "Hunt" no more.

Oh, and it's not an anklet. It's the strap on her shoe. Another little detail which is alot more visible on the printed piece.

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She looks flat. (This critique may be directed at her choice in bras).

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machf
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Do you think that could be 'corrected' in the wedding invitation? [Wink]
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TSN
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Well, one would hope that, of all places, a wedding invitation would be the place where you wouldn't worry about sex appeal.
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bX
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quote:
Originally posted by machf:
Do you think that could be 'corrected' in the wedding invitation? [Wink]

You perv...

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AndrewR
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Oh you blurred the names and date... and I was going to fly from Australia to the US just to crash their wedding by sitting quietly in the back row!! [Smile]

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You clods, those are shoes with the ankle straps! AKA sexy shoes. [Smile]

Aban: Looks fantastic. If they wanted a rating, "Rated H for Happily Ever After" [Wink]

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quote:
Originally posted by bX:
You perv...


Well, I was actually asking Snay if he had that in mind, rather than suggesting it should be done, but...
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bX
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Who's the more pervy the perv or the perv who...blah, blah, blah?
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Captain Boh
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quote:
Originally posted by AndrewR:
Oh you blurred the names and date... and I was going to fly from Australia to the US just to crash their wedding by sitting quietly in the back row!! [Smile]

The bluring isn't all that effective, I can still sort of tell the date.
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Nim
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I hope this doesn't go the way of Brad Pitt's and Jennifer Aniston's wedding rings.
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