Well hel-lo Necromancer....This thread was first posted over a week and a half ago!
Where is everyone?
If this were the BBS, Id have had you for lunch 10 times over by now with material this rich. 
But this isnt, so I wont. 
I used to be quite an artist myself in my day, Im sympathetic. Are you familiar with the work of Jim Starlin? A comic book artist of the 70's. My style was almost indistinguishable from his...which was good and bad at the same time. If you can find some stuff hes done, check it out.
I will be fair in my asessments of your work.
Seriously, this is what I think:
In "Asylum", without knowing the storyline, it would seem that what you may have been trying to express in the two faces was something of a "sinister" nature. They looked more "burned out" to me. I also think the Asylum should have played a more significant roll in the image. Just a few thoughts on that one.
On whatever the other one was:
First observation: The ghoul was much better in this one. But what was the image telling me? That I could not say. The "human" face: Protagonist or Antagonist? I not sure what the image is trying to project, but the art itself is good.
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