Yes....Yes....
Another good piece. Artistically pleasing, yet I must comment on the recurring theme of sexuality.
I take the characters are to represent Kira and Jadzia? Lets face it, this drips with homoeroticism.
And because of that, I dont think you went far enough.
Not that they shouldve been in a "69" position(well...), but something a little more "edgy" may have been what was called for here. Dont be afraid to go out on a limb. Other than that, another thumbs up from me.
Once again, imagination and risk taking in ADDITION to talent are the keys to being a good artist, dont be afraid to explore it.
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