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I think I've figured out what's been keeping you from perfection. When you angle a figure away from the "camera", as with this drawing, the features that are further from the viewer ought to appear slightly smaller. In the case of her breasts, you have them both the same size, which makes the one on the right appear to be larger than the one on the left (if this is the actress'es normal proportions, never mind ). As her face is turned slightly to our right, her left eye ought to be closer in behind her nose (though not completely obscured).
Those lips? Well, if she just ate a lemon, never mind, but I think she's puckering a bit much for someone who's carrying a bat'leth and looks like she's about to use it. Her hips appear slightly small compared to the width of her shoulders.
That's it. Pretty good, and far better than I can do.
--Baloo
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). As her face is turned slightly to our right, her left eye ought to be closer in behind her nose (though not completely obscured).
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