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Lobo
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posted

here is a sketch of the uss agentum:
Version 1.: My favorite.

version 2.:I think this is too FAT:)

comments welcome

Lobo

EDIT: i have made these nacceles for a better warpfield:

[ April 13, 2002, 12:47: Message edited by: Lobo ]

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Aban Rune
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Me like. The only suggestion I have revolves around the front of the saucer. I think it might look better if the saucer came to more of a point at the front. Like, in the third sketch, if the saucer followed the shape of the red oval you have drawn over it. You can still have that break in the middle, but just wrap that saucerline in a little tighter.

That's it for the criticism. Nice job. I actually sort of like the fat one...

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Lobo
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thanks for the tip aban!
you have right!

Lobo

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AndrewR
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I agree with Aban, maybe taper the front in more in-keeping with the 'oval'... and keep the divot... somewhat like the Nova/Equinox.

I was also wondering can we see a little more Bussard collector!?! More like the Delta Flyers amount we see... - keep it in line with the nacelle/oval idea - but just poke it out a little more... a bit more of a bulge - i.e. so we can see more red!!

AND... I think this is a NICE post Intrepid/Sovereign combination... you can see elements of both. For that reason I'd make your registry lower - late 7's early 8's!

Nice job!

Andrew

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capped
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I think curved warp nacelles are more appropo for an alien ship than Starfleet

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The Red Admiral
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Cool work. I'm pretty sure that this is the type of starship Batman would fly!

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Lee
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Ugh. Sorry, I don't like this at all. . . the saucer wings look like a pair of really large labia.

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The Mighty Monkey of Mim
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quote:
Originally posted by Vogon Poet:
Ugh. Sorry, I don't like this at all. . . the saucer wings look like a pair of really large labia.

OMG...you're right. Just look at the overall shape of the ship. The shuttlebay looks like a giant clitoris! [Eek!]

Man, Freud would have a field day with this... [Big Grin]

-MMoM

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Matrix
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...I don't see it?

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Lee
I'm a spy now. Spies are cool.
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Consider yourself bloody lucky, then. Every time I look at it I think "EW!"

This being the internet, I'm sure I could find an example of what I mean by the whole labia thing. But I wouldn't be able to post it here.

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The Mighty Monkey of Mim
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quote:
Originally posted by Matrix:
...I don't see it?

Hmmm...that's probably an indication that you're normal...

Tsk, tsk. What are we going to do with you... [Roll Eyes]

-MMoM

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Lobo
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The reason for the problem, that you can't see it, is called: "tripod.de"

Lobo

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capped
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um.. i dont think thats why

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Lobo
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quote:
Originally posted by CaptainMike:
um.. i dont think thats why

Sorry but it IS so.
Or what do you mean?

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Huh?
Member # 302

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Lobo, have you considered another server? Also, CaptainMike and Matrix were refering to the whole "...looks like a labia and clitoris" idea. And I tend to agree with them.

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