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Hi . I have made the sideview of an Proto Miranda class starship:(2 versions)
Any commens?
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The Defiant
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Great job again, Lobo. My only suggestion is that you should make the bridge module like on the original Miranda, forming the 'peak'. You know what I mean. I like both, but if you have the long pylon of the bottom with the details of the top, and if you take away the rollbar and have the deflector dish above the sensor dome a little.
[ June 01, 2002, 20:13: Message edited by: The Defiant ]
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quote:Originally posted by The Defiant: You know what I mean.
Yes i know
Here is the Frontview:
[ June 02, 2002, 09:22: Message edited by: Lobo ]
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Huh? Are those nacelle pylons straight (last image) or angled downwards (first two views)?
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I think that's the front view of the first ship. What we see in the side view is a single vertical pylon, with 2 horizontal ones attatched to the base.
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quote:Originally posted by Ferg: I think that's the front view of the first ship.
Yeah! Thats right.
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Ferg
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Just realised I forgot to mention how much I like the design! Great work as usual!
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I like it as well. Nice design. Nice rendering.
A couple of teeny nitpicks, though. The running lights on the sides of the saucer...should they be green and red like the ones on the nacelles? Also...the registry on the starboard nacelle needs to be flipped
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The curvature of the top and bottom part of the saucer section looks more like how the refit-versions curve - not how the E-Nil TOS looks (if that's the era/style you were going for - or maybe something inbetween?)
Does it need a deflector dish? The deflectors on the Miranda were on that 'apartment block' at the back of the saucer weren't they?
Maybe the back of the nacelles could be the old 'grill' version not the ball!?! Just a comment.
Maybe original Mirandas looked like the Lantree - with out the roll-bar which could have been just fitted for refit?
Very nice though. Andrew
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