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Well. I am done. After 20 minutes of trying to place more lifeboats on the damn thing, nothing looked good. So here is my final version of the ship. I like it. Its probably going in my portfolio. Hope you guys like it too.
No ACL or red warning stripes at the nacelle ends either.
I like it, but it still needs some refinment: particularly, you should vary your line thickness to give a sense of depth. Lose "Deck 18" while you;re at it: it's too short to be a deck (besides, where is your ship's Jeffries' Tubes and bottomless pits to throw Remans down?)
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Yeah, I actually realized that after i made the images. Meh. Mabye i'll put them in. What ACL or red warning stripes at the end of nacelles?
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Anti Colision Lights are the green (starboard) and red (port)lights on a ship (and starship). The red warning stripes" are "c" shaped markings found at the ends of phaser strips on most starships.
I typed "nacelle" to test you for telepathic powers: you've failed.
And I'm very tired.
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Very nice render. I like the deflector array on the front view. Very original.
One thing I think needs to be changed: on the front view, I think you need to flip flop the lifeboats port for starboard. I'm pretty sure they're angling the wrong way. They need to angle towards the midline, not away from it.
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