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Also, aren't the three lines completely seperate? Yours Balaam run into each other.
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Well my disdain for the formal conventions of verse (it is poetry, afterall, not something serious like backgammon) are precisely why we need our Bard back. I can picture Siegfried with a lute. He's already got a cloak (or was that more of a cape?).
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The art of haiku-- Difficult for Westerners. Help is provided.
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Message on my screen: "Fatal error has occurred" All I see is blue.
Sorry to tell you, This page, it exists no more. Error 404.
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