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OnToMars
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"It sucks," said JeffRaven. "What kind, deviant soul fellates priests during 'Dexter's Lab' without having holodeck sex first? He should be hung! Like Simon! Not..."

That nasty, heavenly-forsaken one trailed to...

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Omega
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Um... I don't see much way that "trailed to" can make sense, no matter what the punctuation or context...

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Jeff Raven
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Omega
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I stand corrected

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Malnurtured Snay
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"It sucks," said JeffRaven. "What kind, deviant soul fellates priests during 'Dexter's Lab' without having holodeck sex first? He should be hung! Like Simon! Not that nasty, heavenly-forsaken one trailed to another Trekkie..."

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Jeff Raven
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Convention.

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I'll assume that that was the end of a sentence, so this is starting a new one.

"Pleh!"


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PsyLiam
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I'm having trouble actually figuring out what "Not that nasty, heavenly-forsaken one trailed to another Trekkie." It sounds like there's a couple of words missing.

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Malnurtured Snay
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"It sucks," said JeffRaven. "What kind, deviant soul fellates priests during 'Dexter's Lab' without having holodeck sex first? He should be hung! Like Simon! Not that nasty, heavenly-forsaken one trailed to another Trekkie Convention. Pleh! That's the trouble ..."

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Malnurtured Snay
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tribbles.

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Omega
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"It sucks," said JeffRaven. "What kind, deviant soul fellates priests during 'Dexter's Lab' without having holodeck sex first? He should be hung! Like Simon! Not..."

That nasty, heavenly-forsaken one trailed to another Trekkie Convention.

"Pleh! That's the trouble with tribbles."

How 'bout that? Now only the part about the Trekkie con doesn't make sense. The rest is a rambling monologue by the nasty, heavenly-forsaken JeffRaven.

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Malnurtured Snay
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"...the nasty, heavenly-forsaken JeffRaven." My new .sig

Nah, just kiddin'. But doesn't it make more sense if its:

"It sucks," said JeffRaven. "What kind, deviant soul fellates priests during 'Dexter's Lab' without having holodeck sex first? He should be hung! Like Simon! Not that nasty, heavenly-forsaken one trailed to another Trekkie Convention. Pleh! That's the trouble with tribbles."

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PsyLiam
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I think it would make more sense if a "who" was added to the sentence. And a "like". And, since I'm forum mod, I can do that.

"It sucks," said JeffRaven. "What kind, deviant soul fellates priests during 'Dexter's Lab' without having holodeck sex first? He should be hung! Like Simon! Not like that nasty, heavenly-forsaken one who trailed to another Trekkie Convention. Pleh! That's the trouble with tribbles."

It's still barely understandable gibberish after "Like Simon". Jeff obviously likes to smoke the crack heroin.

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