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Pixel 1: The location of the registry doesn't match on the front and side views. It's noticably lower on the side view. According to the top view, the read arrow line should be just below the phaser turrets, but on the side view its on the next section further out or down. The arrow should be at the center of the letters, but seems to be near the top.
Pixel 2: Why do the registry letters taper on the top view?
Pixel 3: The sides of rectangles on the front of the bridge are too straight on the front and side views.
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quote:Originally posted by Reverend: I attribute the bad spelling to being up too late and writing all that crap off the top of my head (and it's not like I expected anyone to actually READ it or anything) as for the patch, it never even occurred to me to change the reg, too busy trying to get the grid lines to line up properly I guess (read; it's Masao's fault.) Anyway, all of those errors have been corrected, feel free to clear your cache & refresh.
It's OK..I was so tired I failed to notice "terretory" & "availible" as well.
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I think you may be right. In fact, I'm pretty sure I've got a few of those images. I may just have to take a stab at this ala my Aegian drawing from back in the day.
quote:Originally posted by Aban Rune: I think you may be right. In fact, I'm pretty sure I've got a few of those images. I may just have to take a stab at this ala my Aegian drawing from back in the day.
Found it. Looks like he never finished it though. Regardless, it's changed quite a bit since then anyway. If you want to try and persuade a 3D artist to have a go, your best bet would be to try and scare up someone on either TrekBBS or scifi-meshes. I'd trust our own Axeman with the job, but I gather he doesn't have much time for it these days. You could try PM'ing him, you never know. Of course Vektor ant TrekBBS is one of the best around for TOS rendering, but I doubt he'd be interested...although he did have a bash at my old SD1 design way back when...Best of luck!
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Hmmm... yah, I've got something else printed out at home I think... I'm not going to bother anyone else, but I will see what I can do with what I've got.
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Just be sure to use the images that are there as of now. I've been secretly mucking about with a detail of two all day. Might need to clear down your cache & refresh.
If you have any questions or want any high res close-ups; send me a PM and I can give you my proper email.
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Typing Clergyman was quicker than Reverend?
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